Friday, September 27, 2013

Rewrite point of view manipulitive

Cindy is a very studious college student. She is younger than the majority of the students, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and is usually dresses like crap, but other than that , is very attractive and has an athletic build. Cindy is thin with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup and can be high maintenance. Some might think her to be rude because she is so busy, but in fact she is friendly and talkative to people and always makes time to play video games with her friends. She's a gamer. Keeping her pace has really turned her in to quite messy person. Cindy sometimes forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all, she is a great person.
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Cindy strives to be a studious college student. You might consider her to be younger than some, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and usually dresses like crap, but other than that, I would find her to be a very attractive person with an athletic build.  I would describe Cindy as thin, with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup, and she can be high maintenance at times. Some might think her to be rude because of the busy schedule she keeps, but in fact, I believe her to be most friendly and talkative. Cindy always makes time to play video games with her friends. She can be a bit of a gamer. Keeping her busy pace has really turned her in to quite a messy person. Sometimes, Cindy  forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all Cindy gives the impression to be a great person.

Cindy strives to be a studious college student. You might consider her to be younger than some, but decrepit by no means . Cindy is big in to personal fitness and enjoys working out. As a result of spending countless hours at the gym, she wears a lot of yoga pants and baggy tee shirts. She dresses like crap. I would describe Cindy  slim, with golden honey colored hair and a circular face. She sports one of the most beautiful, bright smiles I've ever seen. Cindy takes great pride in her flawless hair and makeup, and can be high maintenance in that regard. Some people might think her to be rude because of the hectic schedule she keeps, but in fact, I believe her to be most friendly and talkative. Cindy always  makes time to play XBox with her friends. She can be a ruthless gamer. Keeping her hectic pace has made Cindy in to quite a messy person. Sometimes she doesn't take the time to shave. Yuck! But all in all, Cindy gives the impression to be an outstanding person. 
Cindy is a very studious college student. She is younger than the majority of the students, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and is usually dresses like crap, but other than that , is very attractive and has an athletic build. Cindy is thin with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup and can be high maintenance. Some might think her to be rude because she is so busy, but in fact she is friendly and talkative to people and always makes time to play video games with her friends. She's a gamer. Keeping her pace has really turned her in to quite messy person. Cindy sometimes forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all, she is a great person.
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Cindy is a very studious college student. She is younger than the majority of the students, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and is usually dresses like crap, but other than that , is very attractive and has an athletic build. Cindy is thin with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup and can be high maintenance. Some might think her to be rude because she is so busy, but in fact she is friendly and talkative to people and always makes time to play video games with her friends. She's a gamer. Keeping her pace has really turned her in to quite messy person. Cindy sometimes forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all, she is a great person.
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Thursday, September 26, 2013

responce to pictures

I see an image of a young goofy guy wearing a mullet. The phrase is pimp my kettle.com.
I believe the intend audience for this picture is roman noodle eaters. As for the purpose of this picture, I think he uses the tea kettle to heat the water for his noodles. So maybe it is some kind of contest to see who has the most peculiar kettle.

   I see a billboard of a vacuum cleaner and  a real life hot air balloon has crashed in to it and is stuck there. There are several people in the balloon basket. maybe this is a picture to show what happens when you fly too close to things in a hot air balloon.

Coke add shows young kids that playing sports like soccer, basketball, hockey exc... = Fun which in turn= Coke. Like all of those things are in a bottle of coke.   "Live on the Coke side of life" is the slogan. So the target is young athletes wanting them to drink Coke verses a sports drink maybe.

This add is a biker with a chain, beat down by a walker. The logo reads senior self defense academy. Obviously this add is targeting older people to come and learn how to defend themselves, successfully. 

This is a parking spot drawn around a tree that says "reserved for drunk drivers". This is a public service, education add showing one example of what can happen when you drive drunk. I think the target is everyone, of any age that can spread the word not to drink and drive. That there are consequences of bad actions.

Wheres your child? It's a painting on the bottom of a swimming pool of a child face down floating on the bottom of a pool. This is a safety add urging adults and caretakers to really pay attention to young people around the water, to prevent drowning.  Its a hard look at what can really happen in a blink of an eye. There is a smaller child in a life jacket staring at the picture. Makes you sick to your stomach.

letter #1 to cousin, #2 admissions director , #3 Student in China

Dear cousin,
                  I can't wait for you to get here and spend the summer with us! Here is a few things you should know before you get here.  We go 110 miles an hour. We are loud and our schedules are crazy. We don't spend much time at the house, so you can have the place to yourself or you can come with us to the many baseball games and basketball tournaments that the kids are in. You will have your own room, but share a bathroom with Jazzy. We have 2 indoor dogs. I hope you don't have any allergies. Everyone is responsible to pick up after themselves, but we all chip in for outside chores and meal time clean up. Trevor is mostly quiet and he works on Saturdays, so you won't see him much. Josh is in and out with work, so we never plan to have him around. Its just an added bonus if he shows up. Mason is busy with sports and friends. We usually have a few with us that are not ours, but we consider family.  Jasmine will be right there with you always. She will want to play with you and talk your ear off! You can tell her "NO". That is ok. The dogs know no personal boundrys and will want to sleep with you and sit on your lap. You can tell them "NO" too. Let me know what you like to eat and I will try to fix meals you will enjoy. It is nice and peaceful out here for the most part. We have a lot of hummingbirds that visit, but always shut and lock up your cars because we do have lots of other creatures that visit, such as snakes, raccoons, bears, bobcats exc... So needless to say we watch the kids and the dogs closely.   Can't wait till you get here.


Admissions,
                  My name is Holly Page. I am seeking admission to your university. As you can see from my transcript, I am an exceptional student. I never miss class. My grades are high and my teachers will tell you what a joy I am to have in class. I also plug myself into many activities. I am very involved in local sports, the Fordland band, and many of the Middle school and High school clubs. I run the concession stand for the sporting events and am currently on the project prom committee. I love to plug myself in anywhere I can be of help. Last year I was the High school cheer coach and now that I am in school full time I help from the sidelines. I am an enthusiastic and upbeat person that feels pride in helping "the whole" succeed. It is my mission to leave things better than I found it. I also served as a boy scout leader for 7 years. I know the value of hars work, and I believe I'm leaving a good impression for my 3 children to follow. I would be an excellent addition to your campus and am anxious to begin leaving my mark there. I'm sure there are lot's of other applicants, but none of them will work as hard for this university than me.    

Friend,
      My name is Holly. I live in the Missouri, in the United States. I understand you are a student like myself. I finished High school 17 years ago. I had my family of 3 children, and now I'm in college for the first time in my life at 34 years old. I worked in my children's school for 5 years before I was laid off which lead me to seek a degree in teaching. Are you going to school to get a teaching degree too?
I am wondering if you have a family or are you just responsible for you. How did you decide, (if you have) what degree you wanted to pursue? College is like nothing I have ever done before. It really is taking some getting use to. I go 3 days a week. I have 4 classes of 12 hours this semester. How many classes are you taking. I'm doing my general ED now. I hear it will get better as I start my degree classes. Everyone has told me that because I worked in the school for so long, that those classes will be much easier for me as I have already been exposed to that information.

furniture in my life

When thinking of the furniture in my house, I automatically go to my china hutch. I purchased it new after my grandma had passed away. She had been famous for saying "you can have it when I die", but she gave me a set of her china before she departed. I had kept the china in a big rubbermaid container for about a year, still wrapped in bubble wrap, afraid to take it out. When she died I felt like it was time to take it out and put it on display. So I went down to the furniture store and picked out a nice 2 piece hutch. It is very heavy! Its made of dark wood and etched glass. I love it and think of her often when I look at it, or dust it. I don't typically buy furniture, so it was exciting to go and purchase something that holds something so valuable to me. I hope to pass it down to one of my children some day. Given the fact that I think I need 3 of everything (to pass something to each of my kids), I wish I would have gotten a bigger hutch. My collection of beautiful dished is not getting any smaller, so maybe I should have not been so modest and thought ahead. Still, it is one of my most prized possessions, and I love it!

point of view; manipulative

Cindy is a very studious college student. She is younger than the majority of the students, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and is usually dresses like crap, but other than that , is very attractive and has an athletic build. Cindy is thin with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup and can be high maintenance. Some might think her to be rude because she is so busy, but in fact she is friendly and talkative to people and always makes time to play video games with her friends. She's a gamer. Keeping her pace has really turned her in to quite messy person. Cindy sometimes forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all, she is a great person.

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Traits
high maintenance
busy
gamer
studious
happy
rude
messy
friendly
taliktive
athletic
thin
brown hair
atractive
round face
older
younger
nice smile
crappy dresser
needs to shave