Friday, September 27, 2013

Rewrite point of view manipulitive

Cindy is a very studious college student. She is younger than the majority of the students, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and is usually dresses like crap, but other than that , is very attractive and has an athletic build. Cindy is thin with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup and can be high maintenance. Some might think her to be rude because she is so busy, but in fact she is friendly and talkative to people and always makes time to play video games with her friends. She's a gamer. Keeping her pace has really turned her in to quite messy person. Cindy sometimes forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all, she is a great person.
10 weak 2B Verbs

Cindy strives to be a studious college student. You might consider her to be younger than some, but older than a few. Cindy likes to work out and usually dresses like crap, but other than that, I would find her to be a very attractive person with an athletic build.  I would describe Cindy as thin, with brown hair, a round face and a nice smile. She takes great pride in her hair and makeup, and she can be high maintenance at times. Some might think her to be rude because of the busy schedule she keeps, but in fact, I believe her to be most friendly and talkative. Cindy always makes time to play video games with her friends. She can be a bit of a gamer. Keeping her busy pace has really turned her in to quite a messy person. Sometimes, Cindy  forgets to shave. Yuck. But all in all Cindy gives the impression to be a great person.

Cindy strives to be a studious college student. You might consider her to be younger than some, but decrepit by no means . Cindy is big in to personal fitness and enjoys working out. As a result of spending countless hours at the gym, she wears a lot of yoga pants and baggy tee shirts. She dresses like crap. I would describe Cindy  slim, with golden honey colored hair and a circular face. She sports one of the most beautiful, bright smiles I've ever seen. Cindy takes great pride in her flawless hair and makeup, and can be high maintenance in that regard. Some people might think her to be rude because of the hectic schedule she keeps, but in fact, I believe her to be most friendly and talkative. Cindy always  makes time to play XBox with her friends. She can be a ruthless gamer. Keeping her hectic pace has made Cindy in to quite a messy person. Sometimes she doesn't take the time to shave. Yuck! But all in all, Cindy gives the impression to be an outstanding person. 

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